In writing we had to do a inside out of a character I chose Joy here is my work I used similes, metaphors or alliteration
Have you ever watched Inside out
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In writing we had to do a inside out of a character I chose Joy here is my work I used similes, metaphors or alliteration
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Kia Ora Olivia, what a great post. I love all the different ways you have described Joy. I love this movie and have watched it a few times. My favourite character is Sadness. Is Joy your favourite character?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Olivia, you have written some great similes to describe the emotion of joy. What was your favourite simile? I have watched Inside Out and thought it was such a great explanation of our emotions and how they can affect us.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Hart My favourite simile is kind as a puppy's wiggly bum.
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